Lockdown - Revision history

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	==Links==		==Links==
	[~~http~~://www.star-traks.com/~~way~~/~~57-7-waylockdown.txt Lockdown (text)]~~		[https://www.star-traks.com//waystation/stories/page5/62_WAY_WAYLOCKDOWN/ Lockdown]

	~~[http:~~//~~www.star-traks.com~~/~~way~~/~~way.html The Star Traks: Waystation web page~~]

B-guy at 11:51, 28 October 2022

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	This is Mr. Auditmi's final appearance. In honor of that, here's a little trivia about the creation of the character. He really owes his existence to [[Brendan ~~Shust~~]]. Brendan was writing a [[Star Traks: Silverado]] story set on Waystation during the period of [[Bradley Dillon]]'s year away on the [[USS Explorer]]. I had not reached that period in my own writing yet, so I didn't know quite what to say when Brendan asked me who would be running [[Dillon Enterprises]] in Bradley's absence. It was an excellent question, though. I gave it a little thought and came up with Auditmi. At least I'm pretty sure I came up with him. In any case, he actually appeared in the Silverado story before showing up in the actual Waystation series. Just part of the fun of several writers trying to maintain continuity.		This is Mr. Auditmi's final appearance. In honor of that, here's a little trivia about the creation of the character. He really owes his existence to [[Brendan Chris]]. Brendan was writing a [[Star Traks: Silverado]] story set on Waystation during the period of [[Bradley Dillon]]'s year away on the [[USS Explorer]]. I had not reached that period in my own writing yet, so I didn't know quite what to say when Brendan asked me who would be running [[Dillon Enterprises]] in Bradley's absence. It was an excellent question, though. I gave it a little thought and came up with Auditmi. At least I'm pretty sure I came up with him. In any case, he actually appeared in the Silverado story before showing up in the actual Waystation series. Just part of the fun of several writers trying to maintain continuity.

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Cmdrajd: /* Author's Comments */

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Author's Comments

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	This is Mr. Auditmi's final appearance. In honor of that, here's a little trivia about the creation of the character. He really owes his existence to [[Brendan Shust]]. Brendan was writing a [[Star Traks: Silverado]] story set on Waystation during the period of [[Bradley Dillon]]'s year away on the [[USS Explorer]]. I had reached that period in my own writing yet~~, though~~, so I didn't know quite what to say when Brendan asked me who would be running [[Dillon Enterprises]] in Bradley's absence. It was an excellent question, though. I gave it a little thought and came up with Auditmi. At least I'm pretty sure I came up with him. In any case, he actually appeared in the Silverado story before showing up in the actual Waystation series. Just part of the fun of several writers trying to maintain continuity.		This is Mr. Auditmi's final appearance. In honor of that, here's a little trivia about the creation of the character. He really owes his existence to [[Brendan Shust]]. Brendan was writing a [[Star Traks: Silverado]] story set on Waystation during the period of [[Bradley Dillon]]'s year away on the [[USS Explorer]]. I had not reached that period in my own writing yet, so I didn't know quite what to say when Brendan asked me who would be running [[Dillon Enterprises]] in Bradley's absence. It was an excellent question, though. I gave it a little thought and came up with Auditmi. At least I'm pretty sure I came up with him. In any case, he actually appeared in the Silverado story before showing up in the actual Waystation series. Just part of the fun of several writers trying to maintain continuity.

	==Links==		==Links==

Cmdrajd: /* Summary */

2008-06-09T14:01:39Z

Summary

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	*Beck and Porter slept together		*Beck and Porter slept together
	*Commander [[Walter Morales]] still has feelings for Beck as evidenced by his fury at this revelation		*Commander [[Walter Morales]] still has feelings for Beck as evidenced by his fury at this revelation
	*~~Yeoman [[Tina~~ Jones]] has feelings for Morales and resents that he never noticed		*Jones has feelings for Morales and resents that he never noticed
	*Bradley Dillon offered Jones a job		*Bradley Dillon offered Jones a job
	*Jones resents the idea that she should feel in some way indebted to Beck for helping her career		*Jones resents the idea that she should feel in some way indebted to Beck for helping her career

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2008-06-09T14:01:17Z

Summary

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	[[Bradley Dillon]] comes to see Yeoman [[Tina Jones]] in the Waystation Welcome Center as asks her to take a walk with him. He is heading to the docking bay, where he and Mr. [[Auditmi]] are preparing to leave for the planet Bradley has been granted by the [[Multek Enclave]] for the construction of his proposed CasinoWorld. After Auditmi's recent actions on the station, Bradley is having the Zakdorn remain on the planet to oversee efforts there. But that's not what Bradley wants to speak to Jones about. He wants her working for [[Dillon Enterprises]]. Jones is stunned by the job offer.		[[Bradley Dillon]] comes to see Yeoman [[Tina Jones]] in the Waystation Welcome Center as asks her to take a walk with him. He is heading to the docking bay, where he and Mr. [[Auditmi]] are preparing to leave for the planet Bradley has been granted by the [[Multek Enclave]] for the construction of his proposed CasinoWorld. After Auditmi's recent actions on the station, Bradley is having the Zakdorn remain on the planet to oversee efforts there. But that's not what Bradley wants to speak to Jones about. He wants her working for [[Dillon Enterprises]]. She would be the public face of Dillon Enterprises, acting as a liaison between Bradley's company and the public. Jones is stunned by the job offer, and Bradley tells her to think about it while he is away.

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2008-06-09T13:39:32Z

Summary

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	==Summary==		==Summary==
	~~One early~~ morning in Ops, the [[Waystation]] command crew finds themselves the victims of Fleet Admiral [[Nosira Ra'al]]'s revenge plot against Captain [[Lisa Beck]]. Ra'al, upset that Beck refused to spy on [[Bradley Dillon]] for her, has scheduled the command crew to endure a lockdown drill. In the drill, Ops is completely cutoff from the rest of the station for 48 hours. There are no replicators and only enough power for life support. The officers soon discover that the rations that should be in the emergency locker have been taken by one of Lieutenant Commander [[Craig Porter]]'s Operations staff and an IOU left in their place.		[[Bradley Dillon]] comes to see Yeoman [[Tina Jones]] in the Waystation Welcome Center as asks her to take a walk with him. He is heading to the docking bay, where he and Mr. [[Auditmi]] are preparing to leave for the planet Bradley has been granted by the [[Multek Enclave]] for the construction of his proposed CasinoWorld. After Auditmi's recent actions on the station, Bradley is having the Zakdorn remain on the planet to oversee efforts there. But that's not what Bradley wants to speak to Jones about. He wants her working for [[Dillon Enterprises]]. Jones is stunned by the job offer.


			Later that morning in Ops, the [[Waystation]] command crew finds themselves the victims of Fleet Admiral [[Nosira Ra'al]]'s revenge plot against Captain [[Lisa Beck]]. Ra'al, upset that Beck refused to spy on [[Bradley Dillon]] for her, has scheduled the command crew to endure a lockdown drill. In the drill, Ops is completely cutoff from the rest of the station for 48 hours. There are no replicators and only enough power for life support. The officers soon discover that the rations that should be in the emergency locker have been taken by one of Lieutenant Commander [[Craig Porter]]'s Operations staff and an IOU left in their place.

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2008-06-07T01:35:39Z

Author's Comments

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	==Author's Comments==		==Author's Comments==
			Lockdown is basically one of those "put your characters in a room and let them go at it" kinds of stories. [[Anthony Butler]] has done a few with his people over the years in [[Star Traks: The Vexed Generation]], and I thought it was time to write one for Waystation. Originally, though, this one was going to be a stand-alone story. More on that in ''[[Town Hall]]''.


			This is Mr. Auditmi's final appearance. In honor of that, here's a little trivia about the creation of the character. He really owes his existence to [[Brendan Shust]]. Brendan was writing a [[Star Traks: Silverado]] story set on Waystation during the period of [[Bradley Dillon]]'s year away on the [[USS Explorer]]. I had reached that period in my own writing yet, though, so I didn't know quite what to say when Brendan asked me who would be running [[Dillon Enterprises]] in Bradley's absence. It was an excellent question, though. I gave it a little thought and came up with Auditmi. At least I'm pretty sure I came up with him. In any case, he actually appeared in the Silverado story before showing up in the actual Waystation series. Just part of the fun of several writers trying to maintain continuity.

	==Links==		==Links==

Cmdrajd: /* Summary */

2008-06-07T01:30:23Z

Summary

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	==Summary==		==Summary==
	One early morning in Ops, the [[Waystation]] command crew finds themselves the victims of Fleet Admiral Nosira Ra'al's revenge plot against Captain [[Lisa Beck]]. Ra'al, upset that Beck refused to spy on [[Bradley Dillon]] for her, has scheduled the command crew to endure a lockdown drill. In the drill, Ops is completely cutoff from the rest of the station for 48 hours. There are no replicators and only enough power for life support. The officers soon discover that the rations that should be in the emergency locker have been taken by one of Lieutenant Commander [[Craig Porter]]'s Operations staff and an IOU left in their place.		One early morning in Ops, the [[Waystation]] command crew finds themselves the victims of Fleet Admiral [[Nosira Ra'al]]'s revenge plot against Captain [[Lisa Beck]]. Ra'al, upset that Beck refused to spy on [[Bradley Dillon]] for her, has scheduled the command crew to endure a lockdown drill. In the drill, Ops is completely cutoff from the rest of the station for 48 hours. There are no replicators and only enough power for life support. The officers soon discover that the rations that should be in the emergency locker have been taken by one of Lieutenant Commander [[Craig Porter]]'s Operations staff and an IOU left in their place.


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	When the lockdown finally ends, Beck decides to take the command crew to breakfast at McBaughb's. Upon reaching [[Starfleet Square Mall]], they see Colonel [[Martin Lazlo]] running for his life. The marine is soon brought down by a phaser blast fired by a group of armed civilians, including [[Krilik]]. The officers are soon spotted and taken into custody, at which point they are told that they will be taken to the Station Administrator. Beck tells Porter that, after the lockdown, even this is an improvement.		When the lockdown finally ends, Beck decides to take the command crew to breakfast at McBaughb's. Upon reaching [[Starfleet Square Mall]], they see Colonel [[Martin Lazlo]] running for his life. The marine is soon brought down by a phaser blast fired by a group of armed civilians, including [[Krilik]]. The officers are soon spotted and taken into custody, at which point they are told that they will be taken to the Station Administrator. Beck tells Porter that, after the lockdown, even this is an improvement.


	To Be Continued...		To Be Continued...

Cmdrajd: /* Summary */

2008-06-07T01:29:59Z

Summary

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	*Lieutenant Commander [[Sean Russell]] feels that Beck favors Jones and Porter and doesn't give him a fair shake		*Lieutenant Commander [[Sean Russell]] feels that Beck favors Jones and Porter and doesn't give him a fair shake

	Porter, unable to tolerate the bickering, retreats to Beck's office with his toolkit. After several hours, the others are drawn in by the smell of food. Porter has managed to cheat his way around the block on the replicators in the hopes that full stomachs would sooth everyone. It works to an extent, but, as Beck ~~observes~~,
			Porter, unable to tolerate the bickering, retreats to Beck's office with his toolkit. After several hours, the others are drawn in by the smell of food. Porter has managed to cheat his way around the block on the replicators in the hopes that full stomachs would sooth everyone. It works to an extent, but, he knows that the damage has been done now that all of these issues, most of which would never have been revealed in normal circumstances, have been brought to light.


			When the lockdown finally ends, Beck decides to take the command crew to breakfast at McBaughb's. Upon reaching [[Starfleet Square Mall]], they see Colonel [[Martin Lazlo]] running for his life. The marine is soon brought down by a phaser blast fired by a group of armed civilians, including [[Krilik]]. The officers are soon spotted and taken into custody, at which point they are told that they will be taken to the Station Administrator. Beck tells Porter that, after the lockdown, even this is an improvement.

			To Be Continued...

	==Featuring==		==Featuring==

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2008-06-07T01:25:38Z

Also Featuring

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	==Also Featuring==		==Also Featuring==
	*[[Stephanie Hodges]]		*[[Stephanie Hodges]]
			*Mr. [[Auditmi]]

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