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==Summary==
==Summary==
While the [[SS Clydesdale]] is docked at [[Tellar Prime]], [[Mike Harper]] struggles to find a cargo shipping job for his ship. He runs into Captain [[Carter Davenport]] of the [[SS Ottoman]], who offers Mike a job running a necklace to [[Antares]]. Mike accepts, then goes to meet with [[Gravit]], owner of his former employer, [[Gravit & Yurtz]], to see if she has any cargo runs to Antares that need done. She does not, so Mike asks [[Bork]] to talk to his ex-fiancee, [[Annar]], owner of [[Annar's Exports]]. Annar agrees to use the Clydesdale for a cargo run, something she wouldn't normally do because they work for her rival, Gravit & Yurtz, but, in exchange, they also have to take her nephew, [[Duv]] to Antares.


Meanwhile, [[Dr. Janet Corbair]] is determined to find a new part for the broken tricorder that Dr. [[John Smith]] left behind. She accompanies [[Ronnie Harper]] to a nightclub located in the Starfleet docks over the planet, where she propositions then drugs a Starfleet geologist before taking the part she needs out of his tricorder.


With the ship half-full with Annar's cargo, Mike is getting Duv settled on board when he is summoned to the bridge. Gravit has commed and has expedited a cargo run for him, but it will fill more than the remaining cargo space. Mike agrees, but the crew has to find room for the extra containers and not let either company know that the Clydesdale is doing a job for both of them at the same time.
They finally get underway, with Duv none the wiser, and, en route, Dr. Corbair installs the new part into her broken tricorder. As soon as she powers it on, it says it is contacting Starfleet Property Control to authenticate the tricorder's user license. Corbair quickly shuts it off.
At dinner that night, Duv starts an argument with Bork, whom he blames for ending things with his aunt and breaking her heart. Ronnie summons Mike to the bridge. When he arrives, he sees a Saladin-class Starfleet destroyer on the viewscreen. Ronnie tells Mike that they are demanding to come aboard.
The destroyer locks phasers on Clydesdale.
TO BE CONTINUED...


==Featuring==
==Featuring==
*[[Mike Harper]]
*[[Mike Harper]]
*[[Ronnie Harper]]
*[[Ronnie Harper]]
*[[Dr. Janey Corbair]]
*[[Dr. Janet Corbair]]
*[[Bork]]
*[[Bork]]
*[[Smash]]
*[[Smash]]


==Also Featuring==
==Also Featuring==
 
*[[Wodak]]
*[[Pafal-Sris]]
*[[Duv]]
*[[Annar]]


==Author's Comments==
==Author's Comments==
"Back to the Well" itself, it's a pretty basic first story: introduce the characters and setting, send them off on an adventure, and set up some continuing threads to follow later. The passenger the Clydesdale is roped into transporting turns out to be from another universe and probably recognizable to fans of another incredibly long-running science fiction series. Should I have brought in the Tenth Doctor in the first story of a new series? Possibly not. At the time I started writing this story, it really hadn't been that long since David Tennant had left the series, and he was (and still is) my favorite Doctor. I really wanted to write him, though.
This one is really a world and character building story. I wanted to take a bit more time to cover what life is like for the Clydesdale crew as they try to get work and deal with their Tellarite employers. As such, there's not a whole lot of plot happening, but hopefully enough character moments to give readers a better sense of the crew personalities.


Also, I was paying off something from a [[Star Traks: Waystation]] story that really didn't need paying off. There's a throwaway gag in the final Waystation story, [[Going My Way?]], where Craig Porter sees a blue police box in the storage room of Dillon Enterprise R&D. A little bit later, it has vanished. That's it. I never intended it to be some bigger thing. But then with "Back to the Well," I had a reason for the TARDIS to be there. It doesn't matter at all in the grand scheme of things, but from what the Doctor says, you can piece together that he hit the Well in his universe, he and the TARDIS ended up in the Trek/Traks universe and got separated in time. With the unwitting help of the Clydesdale crew, he is able to return to the Well, recall the TARDIS, and return from whence he came (Now there's a phrase I don't get to use very often.). Since "Back to the Well" is told from the perspective of the Clydesdale's crew, they don't know or understand any of this. And for readers who don't get the Who reference, it's just about a guy from another universe who uses the Clydesdale to get home. Hopefully it works either way.
The other thing I really wanted to explore is that things Starfleet Officers take for granted aren't as easily accessible to everyone else. Dr. Corbair needs a tricorder and one of the readily available consumer-grade scanning products just won't do for her purposes. It would be like the difference between a microscope in a actual laboratory versus one you can buy for your kid.


I am really happy with the opening narration in this one. I was going for the tone of an instructional video from the 1950s. It works for establishing things, but I didn't want to carry it throughout. I think it would have gotten old fast. I also don't think I could have sustained it anyway.
As this was part one of two, there's not a whole lot more for me to say. More to come in the comments for [[Busted]].


==Links==
==Links==
[https://www.star-traks.com//side-traks/tossed/tossed_1/ Back to the Well]
[https://www.star-traks.com//side-traks/tossed/tossed_2/ Antares or Bust]

Latest revision as of 14:49, 1 November 2022

Star Traks: TOSsed
Episode name Antares or Bust
Season 1
Episode number 2
Writer(s) Alan Decker
Year 2268
Stardate Unknown
Chronology
Previous in series Back to the Well [TOS]
Next in series Busted [TOS]
Previous in timeline Back to the Well [TOS]
Next in timeline Busted [TOS]


The SS Clydesdale needs to go to Antares, but it needs a full cargo hold to make the trip worth it. Meanwhile, Dr. Janet Corbair finds that obtaining something as simple as a working tricorder is really difficult when you’re not in Starfleet.


Summary

While the SS Clydesdale is docked at Tellar Prime, Mike Harper struggles to find a cargo shipping job for his ship. He runs into Captain Carter Davenport of the SS Ottoman, who offers Mike a job running a necklace to Antares. Mike accepts, then goes to meet with Gravit, owner of his former employer, Gravit & Yurtz, to see if she has any cargo runs to Antares that need done. She does not, so Mike asks Bork to talk to his ex-fiancee, Annar, owner of Annar's Exports. Annar agrees to use the Clydesdale for a cargo run, something she wouldn't normally do because they work for her rival, Gravit & Yurtz, but, in exchange, they also have to take her nephew, Duv to Antares.

Meanwhile, Dr. Janet Corbair is determined to find a new part for the broken tricorder that Dr. John Smith left behind. She accompanies Ronnie Harper to a nightclub located in the Starfleet docks over the planet, where she propositions then drugs a Starfleet geologist before taking the part she needs out of his tricorder.

With the ship half-full with Annar's cargo, Mike is getting Duv settled on board when he is summoned to the bridge. Gravit has commed and has expedited a cargo run for him, but it will fill more than the remaining cargo space. Mike agrees, but the crew has to find room for the extra containers and not let either company know that the Clydesdale is doing a job for both of them at the same time.

They finally get underway, with Duv none the wiser, and, en route, Dr. Corbair installs the new part into her broken tricorder. As soon as she powers it on, it says it is contacting Starfleet Property Control to authenticate the tricorder's user license. Corbair quickly shuts it off.

At dinner that night, Duv starts an argument with Bork, whom he blames for ending things with his aunt and breaking her heart. Ronnie summons Mike to the bridge. When he arrives, he sees a Saladin-class Starfleet destroyer on the viewscreen. Ronnie tells Mike that they are demanding to come aboard.

The destroyer locks phasers on Clydesdale.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Featuring

Also Featuring

Author's Comments

This one is really a world and character building story. I wanted to take a bit more time to cover what life is like for the Clydesdale crew as they try to get work and deal with their Tellarite employers. As such, there's not a whole lot of plot happening, but hopefully enough character moments to give readers a better sense of the crew personalities.

The other thing I really wanted to explore is that things Starfleet Officers take for granted aren't as easily accessible to everyone else. Dr. Corbair needs a tricorder and one of the readily available consumer-grade scanning products just won't do for her purposes. It would be like the difference between a microscope in a actual laboratory versus one you can buy for your kid.

As this was part one of two, there's not a whole lot more for me to say. More to come in the comments for Busted.

Links

Antares or Bust